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Discussion in 'Your Writer's Den' started by Intrepid, Jan 7, 2012.

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid New Member

    Lurker

    who is that stranger
    peeking at my life
    digging to find stories
    and perhaps some strife

    there is nothing for you
    all is by the book
    the hidden whispers floating
    are only what you cook

    you pray by day in the light
    blessings and love bestow
    you sin by night join the fight
    of tongues as cold as snow
     
  2. FadedRose

    FadedRose New Member

    can't put my finger on it , and I don't think this what what you were going for, but this poem made me feel sad.

    maybe because I've been on the crappy end of gossip, but this one is eating at me.
     
  3. Intrepid

    Intrepid New Member

    I think it is very sad when anyone is at the receiving end of gossip but I do feel pity for those who start it. I often wonder what exactly is it that makes someone say, "Today I am going to make up some stuff about someone and start spreading it." I also wonder why gossip often goes unchallenged.
     
  4. FadedRose

    FadedRose New Member

    you make some good points.

    There have been some really emotional poems in the den lately, some of them strike me as quite raw. This particular one of yours really got me, still not sure why.
     
  5. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    It reminded me of a slithering snake.
     
  6. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    Yes, Intrepid, I wonder too, you see, all of my posts are being reported to Ray, and I don't understand why.

    "I also wonder why gossip goes unchallenged" That's why I posted this statement.


    Now, a poem.

    lurker, lurker, are you there
    if you are, I'm unaware
    You may continue
    I don't care
    It keeps you busy
    I'm aware
    stick to peeping, do no more
    keeping track is such a chore.
     
  7. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest



    :( , ::) .......... ;)
     

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