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Discussion in 'Your Writer's Den' started by Aladdin-Fae, Jan 7, 2012.

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  1. Aladdin-Fae

    Aladdin-Fae New Member

    I trusted you until I cried
    I hated you until you died

    I mourned you even after the grave
    I forgave you through the life Christ gave

    (personal)
     
    Aladdin-Fae, Jan 7, 2012
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  2. tm53

    tm53 New Member

    yep
     
    tm53, Jan 7, 2012
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  3. Aliza

    Aliza I'm still standing, alone but upright

    Nice!
     
    Aliza, Jan 7, 2012
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  4. FadedRose

    FadedRose New Member

    very moving, Aladdin. You said a lot with very few words.
     
    FadedRose, Jan 7, 2012
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  5. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    To me it said, "He holds you in the palms of His Hands."
     
    Gina05, Jan 8, 2012
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