Communal Poetry

That poems seems complete as it is. We need to start a new poem. Any thoughts?

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow

She always smiled at me from afar

 

Even after I drove over her with my car


(okay, don't use this one)

 

Ray - I was just going to say how good you are at this..........then I saw your post !

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow.

She always smiled at me from afar
She made me feel like her special star

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow.

She always smiled at me from afar
She made me feel like her special star
Her willing heart stood waiting for a sign

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow.

She always smiled at me from afar
And made me feel like her special star
Her willing heart stood waiting for a sign
Hoping and praying I would make her mine.

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow.

She always smiled at me from afar
And made me feel like her special star
Her willing heart stood waiting for a sign
Hoping and praying I would make her mine.

I wish I knew then, what I know now

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow.

She always smiled at me from afar
And made me feel like her special star
Her willing heart stood waiting for a sign
Hoping and praying I would make her mine.

I wish I knew then, what I know now
We missed the chance to exchange our vows

 

She was my first love, it wasn't just a crush
The feeling deep inside made me blush
What she saw in me I still don't know
My regret was that I didn't allow this love to grow.

She always smiled at me from afar
And made me feel like her special star
Her willing heart stood waiting for a sign
Hoping and praying I would make her mine.

I wish I knew then, what I know now
We missed the chance to exchange our vows
She's moved on since, and found another,

 

i hope they are happy, my love and my brother.

 

ROFLMAO, Trish.......

 

I love it!

 

Excellent! ;D ;D

 

I do like a happy ending ;D