a feeling divine soft warm lips caress my skin stirring up passions from deep within a gentle tongue flickers down my spine sending shivers all over a feeling divine a hand rubs up along my thigh sending my pulse racing sky high bodies entwined and moving in time flesh on flesh a feeling sublime the wanting and waiting all too much i lose control with your touch an explosion like a million stars an escape from my prison bars.
there is sweet refuge in lovemaking. You have expressed it well. What a pretty poem. Endorphins are released during our sexual expression and this helps us to feel better and it is genuine, not a fake thing.
i wrote this about 18 months ago and i did read it to my bf at the time he liked it asked if it was about him or for him but i just giggled and didn't answer him ,that's probably why he now says oh that's nice because i get embarrased easily and just laugh.
Nice one, Amanda.. ...very erogenous... Brings back memory's... :-\.. Combed your hair this morning?... :-X
I hope you know I was kidding about writing that. thats what the smiley was for. I just assume people know my jokes but I dont know you that well yet. So no offence, though I could have written something similar if the muse hit me. It was a great poem and that was my way of saying so! (notice the word assume) you know what happens when you assume?
no i didn't think you were serious i was just saying how long it took me to decide wether or not to post it here i've got the kids at home today and they are driving me nuts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!