a feeling divine (not too rude)

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  1. AmandaJ

    AmandaJ New Member

    a feeling divine

    soft warm lips caress my skin
    stirring up passions from deep within
    a gentle tongue flickers down my spine
    sending shivers all over a feeling divine
    a hand rubs up along my thigh
    sending my pulse racing sky high
    bodies entwined and moving in time
    flesh on flesh a feeling sublime
    the wanting and waiting all too much
    i lose control with your touch
    an explosion like a million stars
    an escape from my prison bars.
     
  2. gardenfish

    gardenfish New Member

    there is sweet refuge in lovemaking. You have expressed it well. What a pretty poem. Endorphins are released during our sexual expression and this helps us to feel better and it is genuine, not a fake thing. :)
     
  3. pardonme

    pardonme Guest

  4. sparksmith

    sparksmith New Member

    I think I wrote that :)
     
  5. AmandaJ

    AmandaJ New Member

    i wrote this about 18 months ago and i did read it to my bf at the time he liked it asked if it was about him or for him but i just giggled and didn't answer him ,that's probably why he now says oh that's nice because i get embarrased easily and just laugh.
     
  6. Trish

    Trish Guest

    Nice one, Amanda.. :)...very erogenous... :)

    Brings back memory's... :-\.. :D

    Combed your hair this morning?... :-X
     
  7. AmandaJ

    AmandaJ New Member

    NOW THERES A THOUGHT :eek: :eek: :eek: :D :D :D :D
    POETRY ABOUT NITS :D :D :D :D
    i only had one :-X
     
  8. Robyn

    Robyn Russell the Wombat

    You're really good at this poetry stuff Amanda - more please! :)
     
  9. sparksmith

    sparksmith New Member

    I hope you know I was kidding about writing that. thats what the smiley was for. I just assume people know my jokes but I dont know you that well yet. So no offence, though I could have written something similar if the muse hit me.
    It was a great poem and that was my way of saying so!

    (notice the word assume) you know what happens when you assume?
     
  10. AmandaJ

    AmandaJ New Member

    no i didn't think you were serious i was just saying how long it took me to decide wether or not to post it here :D :D :D :D i've got the kids at home today and they are driving me nuts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  11. Linda1002

    Linda1002 New Member

    Wow, Amanda.....another beautifully written and expressive poem :)!
     

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