Where No One Can See My Tears

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  1. silent melody

    silent melody Jewish guilt - The gift that keeps on giving!

    Where No One Can See My Tears

    Is there a place to hide,
    From all the pain that is inside?
    A place separated from the fears,
    Where no one can see my tears?

    In the dark I sit and cry.
    I can’t give the answers why.
    The only place I can be is here,
    Where no one can see my tears.

    I am an island that no man can find,
    I have a might fortress around my mind.
    I am alone a side from their jeers.
    Where no one can see my tears.

    It is safe here, no doubt.
    They cannot hurt me if I block them out.
    So here I’ll stay without fear.
    Where no one can see my tears.


    **Brought this one back by request.**
     
  2. charisse

    charisse Been hanging here for 8 years

    Aw thanks Miah, so many here will say I know, and you put the words to it.
     
  3. gardenfish

    gardenfish New Member

    we cannot see the tears from your eyes, but we look into your eyes (if only in our minds) and we see the tears there. THank you for posting this lovely poem again.
    Paul
     
  4. rev

    rev New Member

    so glad you found this to repost! SM, you are such a great person and writer. You can share your soul and we can open our hearts.
     
  5. Linda1002

    Linda1002 New Member

    Miah - You should put them all back up. They're all good!
     
  6. Aladdin

    Aladdin Guest

    post them all - you are amazing
     
  7. Robyn

    Robyn Russell the Wombat

    Yes, like everyone has said, post them all back here Miah. I don't usually come in here, but I am glad I did - you are very talented, as is everyone that posts in this den.
     
  8. Aladdin-Fae

    Aladdin-Fae New Member

    another powerful poem and dear person I had the pleasure of meeting!
     
  9. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    There aren't even words to express what this poem says to me.

    You are very talented.
    I know these words, it touches my soul.

    Thanx for sharing this with us.

    Luv, G
     
  10. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    Tears.
     
  11. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    I'm really feeling your words this morning, where have you gone?
     

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