Time's Up

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  1. HeadNoise

    HeadNoise Invisible Me

    I feel like time is running out
    What is to become of me?
    Is it too late to make a difference;
    Have I wasted so many years doing nothing?
    I didn't think so, but now it seems urgent --
    What can I do?
    Have I started too late,
    Will I be of no use?
    I must hurry... the clock ticks on.
    When is time up?
     
  2. gardenfish

    gardenfish New Member

    I wish I had more people in my life who dared to ask such brave questions. You have already left your legacy just by being true to yourself these years. TIme is up when we die, I think. Maybe? Too much we do not now. It seems that there is so much to be done and time seems like an enemy sometimes. There are all of the mundanities with which to deal. Your poem is provocative. Thank you.
    Paul
     
  3. Stacey3048

    Stacey3048 New Member

    Miss Sherry, your poem really makes me stop and reflect on my life. Thank you for the thought provoking poem. :-* :-*
     

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