Release

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid New Member

    Release

    Maggie hears a soft wail
    One early autumn morn
    She stops what she is doing
    To see where it comes from

    A young one is crying
    Or an animal is in pain
    Maybe it's a wind up toy
    Left out in the rain

    The wail is now a lament
    Piercing through her skin
    Maggie halts her searching
    For the sound comes from within

    The wounded child inside
    Is pleading for release
    She cannot keep her silence
    Maggie's love she needs

    Face buried in her hands
    The tears begin to fall
    Maggie's grief unfettered
    As she starts to recall
     
  2. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    This is kind of dark, gothic, maybe, I tried to picture her in my mind, a woman with her hands over her ears,
    Kneeling and sobbing, quietly. Her mouth and eyes are wide open, but no sound comes out.

    Did I get it?
     
  3. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest


    Why on earth would somebody report this post to the moderator?
     
  4. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    * ~ :)
     

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