Kindness and Light - a poem for Aladdin

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  1. gardenfish

    gardenfish New Member

    For Aladdin

    Kindness and Light

    I get hard of heart sometimes
    and construct walls of pain and hurt
    Self-worth is questionable
    Doubts are pervasive
    Thoughts of failure and
    not being enough swell in my brain
    Then having sensed my need
    someone prays for me and sends their love
    My feebleness begins to dim
    An unknown champion has refueled me and
    in that moment all is well
    Kindness and light from far away have
    rekindled my spirit
  2. Aladdin

    Aladdin Guest

    oh my goodness; i can not stop crying - this truly touched my heart - i guess i try to be so tough on the outside that i forget i'm really just tender hearted and afraid to let it show -

    thank you - i will carry it with me always
  3. Linda1002

    Linda1002 New Member

    Another masterpiece from GF......and it's right on about Aladdin.
  4. Gwendelyn

    Gwendelyn New Member

    Great work GF. You definately captured "the essents of Aladdin"
  5. Bergie

    Bergie New Member

    How cool...a poem written for you!!!

    Wow gf....that was so sweet of you!!
  6. Aladdin

    Aladdin Guest

    i've never met gf and yet when I first read the words i knew they were about me - he couldn't have been more right 0n (sp) people who have met me know that his words captured me as a human being (well except being cantankerous ) haha
  7. sparksmith

    sparksmith New Member

    I hope my good friend you are keeping these writings in a safer place then the boards.

    we need to reflect on them if the board crashes again.
  8. gardenfish

    gardenfish New Member

    Mike I am saving everything. You are kind to remind me of it.
  9. Aladdin

    Aladdin Guest

    ditto - keep these safe
  10. gardenfish

    gardenfish New Member

    tc , I expect this one is safe in your heart. :)
  11. Stacey3048

    Stacey3048 New Member

    Paul, I enjoy reading your eloquent poems. Your words captured Miss Aladdin. Thank you for sharing! :-*
  12. Aladdin-Fae

    Aladdin-Fae New Member

    another friend from .org ......
  13. Aladdin-Fae

    Aladdin-Fae New Member

    I still have it in my purse!
  14. FadedRose

    FadedRose New Member

    How sad that this board no longer has gardenfish.

    That was wonderful, Aladdin. You must feel very special that he wrote that for you.
  15. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    Gosh, I knew you were an inspirational, loving,mgiving woman,mbut I had no idea how intensely these people love your spirit.

    You are truly blessed.

    Garden fish, have you ever been published? That was beautiful!
  16. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    Aladdin, I need you now. I'm in pain, I'm suffering.

    Some will rejoice, I know this.
    But, you will not. I know you, you know me.
    I need a good friend today.

    Garden fish, how about a new poem, it's been way too long.
  17. Aladdin-Fae

    Aladdin-Fae New Member

    You are never alone - even when we feel most alone. People are praying for you. God never leaves you - remember that. As I said before my best friend is Jesus!
  18. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    Thank you. I remember.
  19. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    I bumped this up for Aladdin!
    I hope you start feeling better soon!

  20. Artlover

    Artlover it's a crazy world.

    nice poem, Gf.

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