Discussion in 'Your Writer's Den' started by Intrepid, Aug 8, 2012.

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  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid New Member


    Episodic rising of chaos
    threatens to burst through
    the seams of an illusory state
    of picture-perfect order.

    Systemic degrading of
    thought breaks the chain
    of brightly colored beads
    wrapped around the mind

    Heat explodes from
    deep within the system
    branding hearts with
    indelible streaks of searing ash

    Energy converted
    Pain diverted
    Insanity exploded
    Another star burned out
  2. Titus

    Titus New Member

    Is this a prophesy or an observation?
  3. Intrepid

    Intrepid New Member

    It's nature. All around us.
  4. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    I really connected with these words. It's describing what I'd like this bout with MM and other health issues to do.
    I printed it, it'll go in a small bejeweled frame. I really like it.
  5. Gustav123

    Gustav123 Life,enjoy it.

    I like it. It wore me out though.

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