A dark moment swiftly gone

Discussion in 'Your Writer's Den' started by hollymm, May 22, 2012.

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  1. hollymm

    hollymm Me, 'in' a tree.

    When the darkness comes from nowhere
    and
    engulfs you with it's subtle untruthes
    then
    weaves itself aound you just to poke you here and there
    to
    whisper in your ear about what she said he said
    and
    twists the words around you like the woven sweater worn
    now
    is the time is to break away
    and
    feel the sun on your face again
    then
    leave the dakness behind because it was only that,
    a
    dark moment swiftly gone
     
  2. Intrepid

    Intrepid New Member

    Good work, Holly.
     
  3. Gina05

    Gina05 Guest

    Very, very, inciteful.

    I could picture it being read, softly and slowly, then in a deep, firm voice!
     

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